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What country do you want to stay in for good?

--> It is a very good opportunity to live in a foreign country for some time.
If I have a chance, I want to live in France in Europe, Japan in Asia, and Vietnam in Southeast Asia.
All three countries I talked about are countries where food is so delicious. So if I have a chance, I want to live in those countries.

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Hello, Bo Im!

These countries offer not only spectacular scenery but extremely sumptuous food as well. In time, if it were meant to be, then you can stay in any or all of these countries and enjoy your life there.

Thank you so much for obliging to answer the homework question. It is much appreciated. Excellent job in composing all of your sentences with careful thought and accurate grammar.

I will see you soon in class!

-T. Donna =)

It is a very good opportunity to live in a foreign country for some time.
>> Correct!
 
If I have a chance, I want to live in France in Europe, Japan in Asia, and Vietnam in Southeast Asia.
>> Correct!

All three countries I talked about are countries where food is so delicious. So if I have a chance, I want to live in those countries.
>> Correct!

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