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Essay (Jan 18th, 2022)

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2022-01-18 408

회원님의 영작문

If you could be a super hero, which super hero would you be?
>>>There’s just one hero, Ironman!!!
Since I watched the film in 2008, I’ve completely fallen in love with the character, Tony Stark. And I started learning English right after I watched a short Youtube clip in which I saw a woman who was also in the film, The Avergers : Age of Ultron and was playing a Korean doctor character, was interpreting what Robert Downey Junior told into Korean. Wow! That would be perfectly owesome and brilliant If I could stand beside RDJ, interpreting him. So I went to the nearest Graduate School in the University in the city where I live and met a professor in charge to ask her about how I could enter the Graduate Schoo(majoring in Simultaneous interpretation)l. I studied hard and prepared a lot to have the opportunity to learn the simultaneous interpretation. Fortunately, I pass the exam and I went to the School.. but jus one year. TT Because every step of the subjects I learned were too diffic

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, U Seung!

Oh, You're really a big fan of Iron Man. I bet you know a lot of things about him and the other Marvel heroes. 

Thank you for answering this quite funny question.

~T. Roanne ^_^
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There’s just one hero, Ironman!!!
>> CORRECT!
Since I watched the film in 2008, I’ve completely fallen in love with the character, Tony Stark. 
>> CORRECT!
And I started learning English right after I watched a short Youtube clip in which I saw a woman who was also in the film, The Avergers : Age of Ultron and was playing a Korean doctor character, was interpreting what Robert Downey Junior told into Korean. 
>> And I started learning English right after I watched a short YouTube clip in which I saw a woman who was also in the film, The Avergers: Age of Ultron and was playing a Korean doctor character, was interpreting what Robert Downey Junior told into Korean. 
Wow! That would be perfectly owesome and brilliant If I could stand beside RDJ, interpreting him. 
>> Wow! That would be perfectly awesome and brilliant If I could stand beside RDJ, interpreting him. 
So I went to the nearest Graduate School in the University in the city where I live and met a professor in charge to ask her about how I could enter the Graduate Schoo(majoring in Simultaneous interpretation)l. 
>> So I went to the nearest Graduate School in the University in the city where I live and met a professor in charge to ask her about how I could enter the Graduate School, majoring in Simultaneous interpretation.
I studied hard and prepared a lot to have the opportunity to learn the simultaneous interpretation.
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, I pass the exam and I went to the School.. but jus one year. TT Because every step of the subjects I learned were too diffic
>>Fortunately, I pass the exam and I went to the School, but just one year because every step of the subjects I learned were too difficult.

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