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What does a holiday mean to you?

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What does a holiday mean to you?

Holiday mean to me Refresh and Remind.
What if I don¡¯t have a holiday I feel like I¡¯m machine.
It makes break our life. We can do whatever we want during holiday.

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Hello there, Mun!

Long time no see here on this page! Anyway, you have done a wonderful job in expressing your thoughts on how a holiday must feel like. There can be some things that can bother us every now and then and a very good vacation can rejuvenate and replenish our energy. We can also charge ourselves to take on any challenge that lies ahead.

So, the holidays are near once again. Plan, prepare, and enjoy!

See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

Holiday mean to me Refresh and Remind.
>> Holidays means to me to refresh and unwind.

What if I don¡¯t have a holiday I feel like I¡¯m machine.
>> What if I don¡¯t have a holiday? I feel like I¡¯m a machine.

It makes break our life. 
>> It makes or breaks our lives.

We can do whatever we want during holiday.
>> We can do whatever we want during holidays.
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