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If life is a highway, what mode of transportation are you using?

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I thought that the question is so interesting and metaphysical. Although I have written a number of essay, I have hardly seen similar question to yours. I think that kind of question is good for our life. It make us think about fundamental topic in our life. Anyway, if life is a highway, I want to use a car. This is because a few people can ride in a car and I want to spend my time mainly with my valuable people like family, lover, friend. On highway, there are a lot of people who are riding something. Sometimes, I may stop my car and hang out with them. However, I only need to accompany with a few people who I love. our life is too short to use our time for people who I hate or people who hate me. So, I like a car. It is private and don't receive any distraction because I will make it like that way. I don't need the airplane that can go anywhere, the bus that can take it easily, the train that can carry a lot of people. I just want a car

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Hi there, Kevin!
It's nice to read your answer to this puzzling question.  Keep on explaining your answers with your creative imagination.  Check your spellings, punctuation marks, and capitalization when writing.  Take note of the subject-verb agreement as well.  They are also essential when you take IELTS in the future.  You are on the right track! :)

~T. Maine


I thought that the question is so interesting and metaphysical. 
>>Correct. 
Although I have written a number of essay, I have hardly seen similar question to yours. 
>>Although I have written a number of essays before, I have hardly seen a similar question to this. 
I think that kind of question is good for our life. 
>>Correct. 
It make us think about fundamental topic in our life. 
>>It makes us think about the fundamental topics in our life. 
Anyway, if life is a highway, I want to use a car. 
>>Correct. 
This is because a few people can ride in a car and I want to spend my time mainly with my valuable people like family, lover, friend. 
>>This is because a few people can ride a car and I want to spend my time mainly with valuable people in my life such as my family, lover, and friends. 
On highway, there are a lot of people who are riding something. 
>>On a highway, there are a lot of people who are riding different kinds of transportation. 
Sometimes, I may stop my car and hang out with them. 
>>Correct. 
However, I only need to accompany with a few people who I love. 
>>However, I only need to accompany a few people who are close to me.
our life is too short to use our time for people who I hate or people who hate me. 
>>Our life is too short to use our time with people who I hate or people who dislike me. 
So, I like a car. 
>>Correct. 
It is private and don't receive any distraction because I will make it like that way. 
>>I have my privacy and I don't receive any distractions because I will make it in that way. 
I don't need the airplane that can go anywhere, the bus that can take it easily, the train that can carry a lot of people. 
>>Correct. 
I just want a car
>>I just want a car. 

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