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Essay (Jan 19th, 2022)

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If you had to choose between love and no money or money and no love for the rest of your life, which would you choose?
>>> I would choose the former one. I believe that we can not change our inborn personalities. My wife and I were nearly broke when we got married. However, We both tried not to spend money on purchasing worthless stuffs. Instead, We saved money in the bank and studied about the economy, the global politics and etc to catch the opportunities for investment. We are not on, at some point, a stable level enough to enjoy our lives together.
What I want to tell you is that it doesn't matter if someone you love is rich or not. What matters is that someone you love is willing to try to make huge bucks with you.

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Hi, U Seung!

That is really a wonderful answer! Indeed! What matter is you always got each others back through ups and downs. 

Thank you for answering the question. Have a good rest!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I would choose the former one.
>> Correct! 
I believe that we can not change our inborn personalities.
>> I believe that we cannot change our inborn personalities.
My wife and I were nearly broke when we got married.
>> Correct! 
However, We both tried not to spend money on purchasing worthless stuffs. 
>> Correct! 
Instead, We saved money in the bank and studied about the economy, the global politics and etc to catch the opportunities for investment. 
>> Instead, We saved money in the bank and studied about the economy, the global politics and etc. to catch the opportunities for investment. 
We are not on, at some point, a stable level enough to enjoy our lives together.
>> Correct! 
What I want to tell you is that it doesn't matter if someone you love is rich or not. 
>> Correct! 
What matters is that someone you love is willing to try to make huge bucks with you.
>> Correct! 
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