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I prefer people that is very kind. And I want the place that is very warm and good.

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Thank you for answering your homework. Meeting new people is good because by meeting new people, you expose yourself to new knowledgeEssentially, the more people you meet, the more you increase your knowledge on a variety of subjects. And by increasing your knowledge, you would better understand why it is very important to open your eyes to different perspectives. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:
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I prefer people that is very kind. And I want the place that is very warm and good.
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