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I want to know how they can guess where heritage is

작성자: 김*우
2022-01-19 492

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I want to ask them how you can guess where heritage or jewel is. In the past, I read lots of comic books about archaeology. There was archaeologist, once he guess where heritage is, then he discovered heritage in the first time. I thought it is impossible. However, I thought there must be a way that they guess where heritage is. Though it isn't always exact, but it will be better than go for archaeology without any plans. So, I want to know their own way that they guess where the heritage is. I won't be disappointed when the way is very simple. And, I want to know the rate that can discover the heritage with the guess. I think the rate will be very low. That's why I think archaeology is hard and tiring. However, I can become rich man when I discovered some heritage that is very important and rich. But the successful people are few. I think it needs very big fortune, so I want to be just a common worker.

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Hi, Daniel!  Your answer is interesting.  Please study the corrections to help you improve your grammar and writing skills. 


- Teacher Debbie

I want to ask them how you can guess where heritage or jewel is.
>> I would ask them how they know where an architectural heritage or a jewel is.

In the past, I read lots of comic books about archaeology.
>> This is a good sentence.

There was archaeologist, once he guess where heritage is, then he discovered heritage in the first time. 
>> There was an archaeologist who guessed where an architectural heritage was. Then he discovered it for the first time. 

I thought it is impossible. 
>> I thought it was impossible. 

However, I thought there must be a way that they guess where heritage is. 
>> However, I also thought there must be a way to guess where an architectural heritage is. 

Though it isn't always exact, but it will be better than go for archaeology without any plans. 
>> Though it isn't always exact, it is better than going to an archaeological site without any plans. 

So, I want to know their own way that they guess where the heritage is. 
>> Therefore, I  would like to know their way of guessing where an architectural heritage is.

I won't be disappointed when the way is very simple. 
>> I wouldn't be disappointed if it were simple. 

And, I want to know the rate that can discover the heritage with the guess. 
>> Moreover, I would like to know its success rate. 

I think the rate will be very low. 
>> I think the rate would be very low.

That's why I think archaeology is hard and tiring. 
>> This is why I think archaeology is hard and tiring. 

However, I can become rich man when I discovered some heritage that is very important and rich. 
>> However, I could become a rich man if I discovered an architectural heritage.

But the successful people are few. 
>> Unfortunately though, there are just few successful archeologists.

I think it needs very big fortune, so I want to be just a common worker.
>> I think being one needs a fortune, so I just want to be an ordinary employee.
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