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which chores do you not like to do

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2022-01-20 750

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I had been living alone for about 15 years before I got married since I was 20 years old. I have learnt how to effectively do house chores. As a part of family members, I have to do it as possible as I can do such as cleaning up, cooking and so on. I am quite good at doing repeated work. Thus, I can do any house chores quicker than my wife. Actually, I am not satisfied with the results what my wife is done. I always wash the dishes again although, she did it due to the reason above. I used to leave all plates and bowls in the sink because there were a few dishes that I needed to wash but I must do it immediately once my family are done their meals. If not, there aren't available plates. The most difficult things that I have to do is letting my children take a shower. They always want me to help them but I have back pain when I bend my waist. It sometimes bother me but it's tolerable pain until now. However, I always have a hard time to help patients to wake up from the table .

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Hwang!^^ 

At an early age, my grandmother already gave us daily chores. I remember when I was 9 years old, I already know how to cook rice the traditional way. I really hated that chore before because I really need to focus on the rice that is being cooked. I need to wait for the rice to boil, open the lid of the pot, wait for the water to evaporate then close the lid and put the fire low.  There were many times that our rice has been burned because of my negligence. Good thing, now we have a rice cooker. You can already leave and just wait for the rice to be cooked. :) 

Teacher Andrea 

I had been living alone for about 15 years before I got married since I was 20 years old. 
>> Before getting married, I lived by myself for 15 years from the age of 20. 

I have learnt how to effectively do house chores. 
>> I have learned how to do house chores effectively. 

As a part of family members, I have to do it as possible as I can do such as cleaning up, cooking and so on. 
>> As a part of a family, I have to do as much chores as I can like cleaning and cooking. 

I am quite good at doing repeated work. 
>> Correct 

Thus, I can do any house chores quicker than my wife. 
>> Correct

Actually, I am not satisfied with the results what my wife is done. 
>> Actually, I am not satisfied on how my wife did the chore.  

I always wash the dishes again although, she did it due to the reason above. 
>>  Correct 

I used to leave all plates and bowls in the sink because there were a few dishes that I needed to wash but I must do it immediately once my family are done their meals. 
>> I use to leave all plates and bowls in the sink because there were few dishes that I needed to wash but I must do it immediately once my family members are done with their meals. 

If not, there aren't available plates. 
>> If not, we wouldn't have enough plates to use. 

The most difficult things that I have to do is letting my children take a shower. 
>> The most difficult thing that I have to do is letting my children take a shower. 

They always want me to help them but I have back pain when I bend my waist. 
>> They always want me to help them but my back hurts when I bend my waist.  

It sometimes bother me but it's tolerable pain until now. 
>> It sometimes bothers me but the pain is now tolerable. 

However, I always have a hard time to help patients to wake up from the table. 
>> However, I always have a hard time helping a patient to get up from the table. 
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