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When people from other countries think about your culture, what do they usually think of?

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Korea is becoming a country which provide positive effect around the world. Many people want to learn Korean culture because of K-drama, pop, and food. Nobody were interested in these culture because we are one of the poorest nation around the world in the 20th century. It is common sense that there are nothing to learn from undeveloped country. However, Korea became an advanced country recently and more and more people have showed excellent performance on their speciality, We have BTS, singer, boys group who have shown incredible manner on the stage and singing skill tool. In addition, many people are willing to watch K-dramas and movies due to interesting stories that nobody have thought of it since Neflix launched. As a result, people want to visit Korea to visit shooting places and learn language for understaning lyrics and movie scripts well. I am really proud of it and ready to welcome all people who want to know about our culture.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Hwang!^^ 

Philippines is known for the hospitality of its people. Filipinos will always welcome foreigners. I am always happy when a person will say that they've been here the Philippines. If I asked them the place they've been to, top answers are Boracay and  Cebu. Funny thing is that I've never been to those places.

Countries do have unique cultures and traditions. I am so lucky to actually learn the differences and similarities of each countries.  :) 

Teacher Andrea 

Korea is becoming a country which provide positive effect around the world. 
>> Korea has become a country that provides a positive effect around the world. 

Many people want to learn Korean culture because of K-drama, pop, and food. 
>> Many people want to learn the Korean culture because of K-drama, K-pop, and food. 

Nobody were interested in these culture because we are one of the poorest nation around the world in the 20th century. 
>> In the 20th century, nobody was interested in this culture because we are one of the poorest nation around the world. 
 
It is common sense that there are nothing to learn from undeveloped country. 
>> It is a common sense that there are nothing to learn from an underdeveloped country. 

However, Korea became an advanced country recently and more and more people have showed excellent performance on their speciality, We have BTS, singer, boys group who have shown incredible manner on the stage and singing skill tool. 
>> However, Korea became an advanced country recently and more and more people have shown an excellent performance on their specialty, we have BTS, singer, a boy group who has  shown an incredible manner on stage and singing talent.

In addition, many people are willing to watch K-dramas and movies due to interesting stories that nobody have thought of it since Neflix launched. 
>> In addition, many people are willing to watch K-dramas and movies due to interesting stories that nobody have thought not until Netflix was launched. 
 
As a result, people want to visit Korea to visit shooting places and learn language for understaning lyrics and movie scripts well. I am really proud of it and ready to welcome all people who want to know about our culture.
>> As a result, people want to visit Korea. They want to visit the shooting places and learn the language for better understanding of song lyrics and movie scripts. 

I am really proud of it and ready to welcome all people who want to know about our culture.
>> Correct 
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