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Automatically read my mind

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When I image in my head something, and then computer read my mind.
If it's working, that it's very cool service in computer.
Sometimes, I can't found kind of the service that I wants.
So I wish there was a service that automatically reads my thoughts and finds functions.

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Hi Ann:) 

That can make a lot of things more convenient for us. Great idea!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

When I image in my head something, and then computer read my mind.
>> I want a function wherein when I imagine something in my head, the computer can read it. 

If it's working, that it's very cool service in computer.
>If it works, it will be a very cool functions for computers. 

Sometimes, I can't found kind of the service that I wants.
>> Sometimes I can't find the functions that I want on computers. 

So I wish there was a service that automatically reads my thoughts and finds functions.
>> So I wish that there was a service that would automatically read my thoughts and finds it's functions.
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