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If a book has been made into a movie, which do you prefer to do first, see the movie or read the book? Why?

I prefer to see the movie first. Because seeing image is more effective than just reading some text to comprehend content. After I see the movie, I can recall the image about the content in reading the book. For example, readers can think "what is abracadabra?" while they read "Harry Potter". But if they saw the movie "Harry Potter" first, they can know what the magic spell means. So I always watch the movie first.

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Hi Won:) 

That's true. People are different. There are people who are more on visuals and there are some that are more on imagining things. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I prefer to see the movie first. 
>> I prefer to see the movie first because it is more effective than just reading some text to comprehend the content. 

Because seeing image is more effective than just reading some text to comprehend content. 
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

After I see the movie, I can recall the image about the content in reading the book. 
>> After seeing the movies, I can recall the images when I read the book. 

For example, readers can think "what is abracadabra?" while they read "Harry Potter". 
>> For example, readers can think about, "What is the meaning of Abracadabra?" while they read "Harry Potter". 

But if they saw the movie "Harry Potter" first, they can know what the magic spell means. 
>> But if they saw the movie "Harry Potter" first, they can know what it means. 

So I always watch the movie first.
>> So, I want to always watch the movie first. 
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