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What does this saying mean, \"blood is thicker than water\"?

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As far as I know, the saying means that absolutely, my family member is more reliable than anyone. It is a common belif that it is true. However, there are the people who trick their family and treat poorly. Of course, there are a lot of people who love their family. I mean that the saying is almost right but it is not perfectly true. It could hurt the children who are harrased by their parents or the people who are tricked by their relatives in their heart. The absoulte truth may be absurd things. Nevertheless, our family is lovely and important. I belive that if there were people who are absolute my side, It would be my families.

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Hello Kevin!
You have a nice idea about the topic.  However, you need to check your spelling at times when you are typing or writing.  Grammar and spelling have a strong impact on the context of your homework.  :)

~T. Maine



As far as I know, the saying means that absolutely, my family member is more reliable than anyone. 
>>Correct. 
It is a common belif that it is true. 
>>It is a common belief that is true. 
However, there are the people who trick their family and treat poorly. 
>>However, there are some people who trick their family members and treat them poorly. 
Of course, there are a lot of people who love their family. 
>>Correct. 
I mean that the saying is almost right but it is not perfectly true. 
>>Correct. 
It could hurt the children who are harrased by their parents or the people who are tricked by their relatives in their heart. 
>>It could hurt the children who are harassed by their parents or the people who are tricked by their relatives.
The absoulte truth may be absurd things. 
>>The absolute truth may be absurd. 
Nevertheless, our family is lovely and important. 
>>Correct. 
I belive that if there were people who are absolute my side, It would be my families.
>>I believe that if there were people who are certainly on my side, it would be my family. 



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