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I prefer reading the book than seeing the movie. In my case, I can develop my thinking power and imagination by reading books.

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Hi Hyeon:) 

Yes, this can definitely widen our perspective in terms of the story. We can enjoy it more this way. 

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I prefer reading the book than seeing the movie. 
>> I prefer reading the book first than seeing the movie first. 

In my case, I can develop my thinking power and imagination by reading books.
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