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1. Because I was tired, I decide to go home.
2. As you know, I worked very hard.
3. The man that she married was an old friend of mine.
4. The house that I lived is very small.
5. She was upset because anyone help to her.
6. While I'm having a shower then I slipped on the floor.
7. Because she was so kind, people liked her.
8. He acted in a film the name of whose I have forgotten.
9. He was respected from the people with that he worked.
10. Have you get anything which belongs to me?

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Hello Agee,

Great job in your homework!!!

I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^

T. Jeny

1. Because I was tired, I decide to go home.
>>correct
2. As you know, I worked very hard.
>>correct
3. The man that she married was an old friend of mine.
>>correct
4. The house that I lived is very small.
>>The house where I live is very small
5. She was upset because anyone help to her.
>>She was upset because she had no one to help her.
6. While I'm having a shower then I slipped on the floor.
>>While I was having a shower I slipped on the floor.
7. Because she was so kind, people liked her.
>>correct
8. He acted in a film the name of whose I have forgotten.
>>He has acted in a film the name of which I have forgotten.
9. He was respected from the people with that he worked.
>>He was respected by the people with whom he worked.
10. Have you get anything which belongs to me?
>> Have you got anything that belongs to me?
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