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Can money buy happiness?

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In a short term, I think money can buy happiness.
Because If we have a lot of money, we can buy anything we want as well as do anything.
But, we can not buy health by money. I think the meaning of happiness is a healthy body.
If we are not healthy, we can't do something and will eventually get depressed.
Also, we can not buy time by money.
Although we have l large number of money, we can't go back to the past.

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Hi, Jin!

Well, that one is a good answer. I can't help, but to agree with you as well. The most important thing in the world right now is our health and the time we have. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about it!

Have a great day!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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In a short term, I think money can buy happiness.
>> Correct! 
Because If we have a lot of money, we can buy anything we want as well as do anything.
>> Correct! Or Because If we have a lot of money, we can buy anything we want as well as do anything that we like.
But, we can not buy health by money. I think the meaning of happiness is a healthy body.
>> But, we cannot buy health with money. I think the meaning of happiness is a healthy body.
If we are not healthy, we can't do something and will eventually get depressed.
>> Correct! 
Also, we can not buy time by money.
>> Also, we cannot buy time with money.
Although we have l large number of money, we can't go back to the past.
>>Although, we have a large amount of money, we can't go back to the past.
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