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Who is the teacher that inspired you the most and what is the most important lesson you\'ve learned

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In my opinion, my elementary school teacher inspired me the most and she taught me the way to look with various perspectives.
She tried to escape and break the fixed ideas and also she tried to look with different perspectives.
And she taught me and my friends the way to break the fixed ideas and to see something with various perspectives.
Also she played with us so we were able to communicate with each other easily.
I've never met that type of teacher so I was a little surprise in many cases.
But now, I think that she was my best teacher and she inspired me the most as a teacher.

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Hi John:)

Teachers who help us grow as people are responsible for imparting some of life's most important lessonsThough a teacher's influence on the social sphere of school lessens as students mature, those early lessons still have an effect on how they will interact with others in the future.

PS: I think it would be great if you keep in touch with her. She is so inspiring. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

In my opinion, my elementary school teacher inspired me the most and she taught me the way to look with various perspectives.
>> In my opinion, my elementary school teacher inspired me the most because she taught  to look with various perspectives.

She tried to escape and break the fixed ideas and also she tried to look with different perspectives.
>> She tried to escape and break the fixed ideas and also she tried to see thing in different perspectives. 

And she taught me and my friends the way to break the fixed ideas and to see something with various perspectives.
>> She taught us to do the same thing too. 

Also she played with us so we were able to communicate with each other easily.
>> She also played with us so we were able to communicate with her easily. 

I've never met that type of teacher so I was a little surprise in many cases.
>> I've never met a teacher like her so I was a little surprised. 

But now, I think that she was my best teacher and she inspired me the most as a teacher.
>> So now, I think that she is the best teacher that I've ever had. She inspired me the most. 

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