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What is your favorite exercise and why?

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What is your favorite exercise and why?
My favorite exercise is squat. Because My legs are strong so It¡¯s easier than other exercises. And also I got a muscles easily.


What are some benefits of waking up early?
First, I can have a longer day so I can prepare for a day. What I wanna do today or remind I have to do something.

Second, I can go to the Gym in the morning before I go to academy. It¡¯s also similar reason with above but this is important to me so it¡¯s second reason.

Third, I¡¯m not making a plan a day before or a week before. I prefer make a plan when I¡¯m thinking about something. Most time I start to do at that time. That¡¯s why It¡¯s flexible afternoon I might use it.

So this is my some benefits of waking up early.

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Hello there again, Mun!

Thank you so much for these homework answers! You pushed so much effort in the gym today as well as answer my questions. I appreciate all of these efforts.

Anyway, there are minute suggestions I have made here on your answers. Read them carefully and note the proper capitalization of letters as well as placing the proper prepositions to make your sentences easier to comprehend.

We can also discuss these in class if you wish. Again, great job on your homework!

See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

My favorite exercise is squat. Because My legs are strong so It¡¯s easier than other exercises. 
>> My favorite exercise is squat because my legs are strong so it¡¯s easier than other exercises. 

And also I got a muscles easily.
>>  And also, I get muscles easily.

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First, I can have a longer day so I can prepare for a day. What I wanna do today or remind I have to do something.
>>  First, I can have a longer day so I can prepare for the day. I can plan what I wanna do today or remind myself that I have to do something.

Second, I can go to the Gym in the morning before I go to academy. 
>> Correct!
Or: Second, I can go to the gym in the morning before I go to the academy. 

It¡¯s also similar reason with above but this is important to me so it¡¯s second reason.
>> It¡¯s also a similar reason with the above, but this is important to me so it¡¯s the second reason.

Third, I¡¯m not making a plan a day before or a week before. 
>> Correct!

I prefer make a plan when I¡¯m thinking about something. 
>> I prefer to make a plan when I¡¯m thinking about something. 

Most time I start to do at that time. That¡¯s why It¡¯s flexible afternoon I might use it.
>> Most of time, I start to do it at that time. That¡¯s why when it¡¯s a flexible afternoon, I might use it.

So this is my some benefits of waking up early.
>> So these are some benefits of waking up early.
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