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homework

작성자: 이*빈
2022-01-27 510

회원님의 영작문

1. _Although_I don’t agree with him, I think he is honest.
a) although b) despite c) either could be used here
2. I would like to go out, _although_it is a bit late.
a) although b) despite c) either could be used here
3. _in spite of_the rain, we went out.
a) in spite of b) despite c) either could be used here
4. She went on working _despite_ she was tired.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
5. _Though_ he is fat, he runs fast.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
6. She went on working, _though_the fact that she was tired.
a) despite b) though c) either could be used here
7. _Though_ I was angry, I kept quiet.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
8. _although_ it was a bit expensive, I decided to buy it.
a) though b) although c) either could be used here
9. _though_ she is poor, she is happy.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
10. I managed to do it, _despite_he didn’t help me.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Agee,

Thank you for you homework, I hope this could really help you increase your skills in English.

You need to remember to do more things that you are good and do less with the things you aren't good at.

Have a wonderful day!!!!

T. Jeny


1. _Although_I don’t agree with him, I think he is honest.
a) although b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
2. I would like to go out, _although_it is a bit late.
a) although b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
3. _in spite of_the rain, we went out.
a) in spite of b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
4. She went on working _despite_ she was tired.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
>>She went on working, though she was tired.
5. _Though_ he is fat, he runs fast.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
6. She went on working, _though_the fact that she was tired.
a) despite b) though c) either could be used here
>>She went on working, despite the fact that she was tired.
7. _Though_ I was angry, I kept quiet.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
8. _although_ it was a bit expensive, I decided to buy it.
a) though b) although c) either could be used here
>>correct
OR>> Though / although it was a bit expensive, I decided to buy it.
9. _though_ she is poor, she is happy.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
>>correct
10. I managed to do it, _despite_he didn’t help me.
a) though b) despite c) either could be used here
>>I managed to do it, though he didn’t help me.
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