¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

How has technology changed business? Do you think it\'s created more work or less?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: º¯*¿ø
2022-01-27 851

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

It's a time of the 4th industry revolution. IT and SMART technologies has changed our lifes simpler than before. For example now We don't have to clean the laundries by our hands, we just need to put them to the laundry machine. And we don't need to brush and wipe the floor. The automatic SMART vacuum cleaner clean the floor itself. Likewise the technology advance eases our burden.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, John! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

It's a time of the 4th industry revolution.
>> It's the time of the 4th industrial revolution.
 
IT and SMART technologies has changed our lifes simpler than before.
>> IT and SMART technologies have changed our lives simpler than before.
OR>>  IT and SMART technologies have changed our lives making it easier than before.

For example now We don't have to clean the laundries by our hands, we just need to put them to the laundry machine.
>> For example, now we don't have to do laundry with our hands, we just need to put them in the laundry machine.

And we don't need to brush and wipe the floor. 
>> And we don't need to sweep and wipe the floor. 

The automatic SMART vacuum cleaner clean the floor itself. 
>> The automatic SMART vacuum cleaner cleans the floor itself. 

Likewise the technology advance eases our burden.
>> Likewise, advanced technology eases our burden.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
114717 Nap have to be moderate. ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 421
114716 Homework ¿À*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 542
114715 Korean drama. ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 300
114714 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 364
114713 Homework ±â*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 264
114712 Favorite way to practice ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 4
114711 Why did you choose your major? ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 691
114710 What is your biggest regret in your life and why? °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 0
114709 What is your biggest regret in your life and why? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 3038
114708 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 1
114707 Tuesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 339
114706 Is this sentence grammatically correct? °­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 402
114705 e-mail correction ¹Ú*±¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 0
114704 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 1
114703 e-mail correction ¹Ú*±¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 0
114702 What do you think about coffee shop hopping? Please give details... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 347
114701 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 0
114700 You sent a lot of questions. I did try to post all of the... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 309
114699 home work ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 323
114698 home work ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-12-14 915

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04