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If I see that my friends are hurt by other students, then I will help my friends by telling it to my teacher. I think fighting or telling 'Don't do that!" is not good way. Teacher always teach us that 'When you see that your friends are hurt by other students, then tell them 'Don't do that!'. However, it can't be a good way in real situation. If I do like it, I'll be hurt by them, too. So, the most peaceful and best way is telling to my teacher. Then I won't be hurt, and my friend will be safer because most of bad students can hurt my friend if I do like it. In conclusion, in this case it's okay that become coward. And we are not cowards, but we are wise. This is the best way for us, and my friend.

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Hi, Daniel! That's very smart of you! I think that's the best way to save you and your friend from bullies. I hope you don't get to meet bullies though. 

- Teacher Debbie

If I see that my friends are hurt by other students, then I will help my friends by telling it to my teacher.
>> If I see my friends being hurt by other students, I will help them by telling my teacher about it.

 I think fighting or telling 'Don't do that!" is not good way.
>> I think fighting with these bullies or saying, "Don't do that!" is not good.

 Teacher always teach us that 'When you see that your friends are hurt by other students, then tell them 'Don't do that!'. 
>> Teachers always tell us that when other students hurt our friends, we should say, "Don't do that!"

However, it can't be a good way in real situation. 
>> However, it can't be good in reality.

If I do like it, I'll be hurt by them, too.
>> If I say that, I'll be hurt by them, too.

So, the most peaceful and best way is telling to my teacher. 
>> Therefore, the best and most peaceful way to help my friends is tell my teacher about it.

Then I won't be hurt, and my friend will be safer because most of bad students can hurt my friend if I do like it. 
>> Then I won't be hurt, and my friend will be safer. 

In conclusion, in this case it's okay that become coward. 
>> In conclusion, it's okay to be a coward in this situation.

And we are not cowards, but we are wise.
>> Moreover, we are not cowards, but we are wise.

 This is the best way for us, and my friend.
>> This is the best way for me and my friend.

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