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Essay (Jan 25th, 2022)

작성자: 남*승
2022-01-28 1086

회원님의 영작문

Do you think it is a good idea to travel with friends, or alone? How about with your family?
>>It depends.
I like to go somewhere outside of the city, either with my friends or with my family. Considering my inclination, looking back, I’ve been kept company with someone wherever I go, Most of the time. It seems like I prefer to talk with them, take some picture with them and have a chat about the travel after travel. I usually cannot remember where I went, what I saw and what I experienced, but I do remember with whom I went.
And I love to travel with my family. My wife a true lover for travel. She spent all the money she had earned before the marriage, not even leaving a dollar in her bank account. Not a joke. The good thing is that whatever the destination of a trip is, she plans ahead perfectly, whether it’s national or abroad. And, if asked, she plans for the trip for others, too, after reading two, three books and Googling about the destination. What an amazing woman she is!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, U Seung! 

Well, each people do have their own liking and definition of a wonderful trip. That's actually good because you do enjoy doing it with the people who are special to you. I hope you and your family can travel again soon.

Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful evening! Enjoy the holidays! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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It depends.
>> Correct! 
I like to go somewhere outside of the city, either with my friends or with my family.
>> Correct!  
Considering my inclination, looking back, I’ve been kept company with someone wherever I go, Most of the time. 
>> Considering my inclination, looking back, I’ve been keeping company with someone wherever I go, most of the time. 
It seems like I prefer to talk with them, take some picture with them and have a chat about the travel after travel. 
>> It seems like I prefer to talk with them, take some picture with them and have a chat about the travel after the travel. 
I usually cannot remember where I went, what I saw and what I experienced, but I do remember with whom I went.
>> Correct! 
And I love to travel with my family. 
>> Correct! 
My wife a true lover for travel. She spent all the money she had earned before the marriage, not even leaving a dollar in her bank account. 
>> My wife a true lover of travel. She spent all the money she had earned before the marriage, not even leaving a dollar in her bank account. 
Not a joke. 
>> Correct! 
The good thing is that whatever the destination of a trip is, she plans ahead perfectly, whether it’s national or abroad. And, if asked, she plans for the trip for others, too, after reading two, three books and Googling about the destination. 
>> Correct! 
What an amazing woman she is!
>> Correct! 
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