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The change of birthday culture in my country

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Although l have not experienced a birthday party of old fashion, I heard from my parents there was a red bean rice cake instead of western cake.
And people used to congratulate especially who got age 60, because lifetime of 60 years was long live at that time.
However, there is a tendency to eliminate that special party these days as life time is getting longer and now 60 years old is not special one anymore.

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Hi Winter, thank you for this. Have a great day! 
Jasmin 

Although l have not experienced a birthday party of old fashion, I heard from my parents there was a red bean rice cake instead of western cake.
>>I heard from my parents that we used to have the traditional red bean cakes for birthdays not the western cakes but I haven't tried it yet.
And people used to congratulate especially who got age 60, because lifetime of 60 years was long live at that time.
>>Celebrating the 60th birthday is a huge milestone and we congratulate them for that breakthrough. 
However, there is a tendency to eliminate that special party these days as life time is getting longer and now 60 years old is not special one anymore.
>>However, there is a predisposition that they don't want to celebrate the 60th birthday anymore because the average lifespan is increasing nowadays. 
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