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I don't think fishing is a popular hobby for young people
I've heard of some friends fishing in Korea.
But no one seems to fish in Switzerland.
It seems to be popular with older people though.
Because there are many fishing boats near the river.

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Good morning Ji Yun! 
I think you're right. Young people prefer active activities than boring ones. 
See you later! 

I don't think fishing is a popular hobby for young people
>>> CORRECT!
I've heard of some friends fishing in Korea.
>>> I've heard of some friends went fishing in Korea.
But no one seems to fish in Switzerland.
>>> CORRECT!
It seems to be popular with older people though.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there are many fishing boats near the river.
>>> CORRECT! 
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