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Homework (Feb 3th, 2022)

작성자: 남*승
2022-02-04 1353

회원님의 영작문

Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?

>> I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. But, actually, it’s kind of difficult because it’s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we’re gonna do on weekends. Whenever my daughter doesn’t wanna go out, my wife pursuads her to go out until she tells, “Yes mommy, I’ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies”
However, I don’t think that my wife is bad. She’s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.

I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocaburaries using a vocaburary book. Tomorrow, I’m gonna buy one. Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words. I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi U Seung, 

Weekends offer a respite from the rat race. Not only does it reset your body, but it also lowers your levels of stress, plus uplifts your mood. The weekend is a great time to spend a few moments with the family and plan what to do in your upcoming week. Enjoy your weekend spending your time with your family. Have a great weekend.. ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?
>> Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?(CORRECT)

I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. 
>>I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. (CORRECT)
But, actually, it’s kind of difficult because it’s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we’re gonna do on weekends. 
>> But, actually, it’s kind of difficult because it’s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we’re gonna do on weekends. (CORRECT)
Whenever my daughter doesn’t wanna go out, my wife persuades her to go out until she tells, “Yes mommy, I’ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies”.
>> Whenever my daughter doesn’t wanna go out, my wife persuades her to go out until she tells, “Yes mommy, I’ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies”.(CORRECT)
However, I don’t think that my wife is bad. She’s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.
>>However, I don’t think that my wife is bad. She’s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.(CORRECT)
I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocabularies using a vocabulary book. 
>>I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocabulary using a vocabulary book. 
Tomorrow, I’m gonna buy one. 
>> Tomorrow, I’m gonna buy one. (CORRECT)
Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words.
>>Most of the writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy, and awkward words.
 I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!
>> I want to express my thoughts with the right words for the situation through logical flow!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones.? How do they give you joy and comfort?

>> I do want to stay home, and so does my daughter. But, actually, it’s kind of difficult because it’s always been my wife who has the mightiest power deciding what we’re gonna do on weekends. Whenever my daughter doesn’t wanna go out, my wife pursuads her to go out until she tells, “Yes mommy, I’ll go out with you, but only if you give me some chocolate or candies”
However, I don’t think that my wife is bad. She’s quite nice, actually. She cooks well, is always polite to her parents-in-law and etc.

I just popped up an idea in my mind that I should learn vocaburaries using a vocaburary book. Tomorrow, I’m gonna buy one. Most of my writings I wrote for the last month consist of very simple, easy and awkward words. I want to express my thoughts with right words for the situation through logical flow!
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