¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

How can you increase your energy?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹®*À²
2022-02-07 457

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

How can you increase your energy?

I increase my energy when I meet good friends or after workout.
First, I¡¯m so extrovert. So that I really like going out and meet a people. Especially Who I love.
Second, I don¡¯t like a workout. But when I finished workout I have a more energy. Probably Endorphin something? And get a positive thinking it all makes my positive energy.

What food do you eat when you are stressed?
I eat a lot of junk food when I¡¯m stressed. Especially sweet and salt chips. Love potato chips.^^
Stress makes bad circle in my routine. Eat harmful food, stay at home, imagine worst situations and gain weight.
So I¡¯m trying not to worry about stress.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi there Mun!

I am so happy to read your homework once again. Thank you for sending me these answers. Anyway, a person like you who is full of energy needs to exert a lot more energy to be able to live happier and to stay more productive. However, at times, this could be stressful because you might have too much on your plate.

Thus, a good balance of activity and rest is the best.

I hope that you will have a fantastic week! See you again in class soon!

-T. Donna =)

How can you increase your energy?

I increase my energy when I meet good friends or after workout.
>> Correct!

First, I¡¯m so extrovert. So that I really like going out and meet a people. Especially Who I love.
>> First, I¡¯m so extrovert. So I really like going out and meeting people especially those who I love.

Second, I don¡¯t like a workout. But when I finished workout I have a more energy. Probably Endorphin something? And get a positive thinking it all makes my positive energy.
>>  Second, I don¡¯t like to work out but when I finished working out, I have more energy probably from the endorphin or something. And finally, I get a positive thinking that gives me positive energy.

What food do you eat when you are stressed?

I eat a lot of junk food when I¡¯m stressed. Especially sweet and salt chips. Love potato chips.^^
>> I eat a lot of junk food when I¡¯m stressed especially sweet and salty chips. I love potato chips.

Stress makes bad circle in my routine. Eat harmful food, stay at home, imagine worst situations and gain weight.
>> Stress makes a bad circle in my routine like eating harmful food, staying at home, imagining worst situations and gaining weight.

So I¡¯m trying not to worry about stress.
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
116674 2022.2.21 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 866
116673 2022.2.18 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 1087
116672 Homework ½Å*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 0
116671 homework ¹Ú*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 1011
116670 My exercise ÀÌ*³ª ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 1022
116669 What is your favorite English movie and why? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 929
116668 Lesson Ȳ*±¸ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-22 849
116667 homework ¹Ú*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 891
116666 difficulties and problems at work ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 5
116665 Tell me about your workplace ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 8
116664 Do you believe in the saying ¡°Tell me who your friends are and... ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 508
116663 What\'s the school project that you really like? / What\'s the... ÁÖ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 548
116662 2/21 homework ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 426
116661 What do you wanna study in the future? Why? ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 873
116660 What do you want to improve on your health? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 2
116659 What are the benefits of short travels and long travels? Àå*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 1351
116658 homework ±è* ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 671
116657 Coffee shops ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 503
116656 What is your favorite English movie and why? Ȳ*º° ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 434
116655 What is your favorite way to practice your English? Àü*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-02-21 663

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04