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The best place to camp in my country

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In my opinion, the best place to camp in my country is Nanji camping site.
Nanji used to the garbage island but now Nanji is reclaimed and returned to popular camping site.
There is a river next to Nanji, so that people could feel breeze and watch beautiful landscape.
Indeed, I've never tried to camp at there, but I really want to visit there someday.

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Hi Sanho, thank you for this. Have a great day
Jasmin 


In my opinion, the best place to camp in my country is Nanji camping site.
>>In my opinion, the best place in my country to go on a camp is Nanji camping site. 
Nanji used to the garbage island but now Nanji is reclaimed and returned to popular camping site.
>>Nanji used to be a place where you throw all the garbage in Korea but now Nanji became a popular camping site once again. 
There is a river next to Nanji, so that people could feel breeze and watch beautiful landscape.
>>There is a river next to Nanji so people could feel the breeze and watch the beautiful landscape. 
Indeed, I've never tried to camp at there, but I really want to visit there someday.
>>Nevertheless, I've never been there but hopefully I could visit the place someday. 
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