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What is the best lesson you have learned from one of your teachers before? Explain in detail.

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I think the best lesson I've ever learned from my teacher is 'break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives.'.
There are a lot of big and small problems in this world.
Of course we can't figure them out all, but we should have right choices so that we can figure out some problems.
And if we want to have right choices, we should look something with many kinds of perspectives.
Also we have to break down the fixed ideas for our right choices and other people's right choices.
That's why I think that the best lesson I've had from my teacher is 'break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives.'.

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Hi John:)

This is a great lesson. I hope that you can pass this to different kinds of people. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think the best lesson I've ever learned from my teacher is 'break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives.'.
>> I think the best lesson I've ever learned from my teacher is to break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives.

There are a lot of big and small problems in this world.
>> CORRECT

Of course we can't figure them out all, but we should have right choices so that we can figure out some problems.
>> Of course we can't figure them out all, but we should have right choices so that we can figure out these things. 

And if we want to have right choices, we should look something with many kinds of perspectives.
>>> And if we want to make right choices, we should look at thing through different perspectives. 

Also we have to break down the fixed ideas for our right choices and other people's right choices.
>> Also,  we have to break down the fixed ideas for our choices and other's. 

That's why I think that the best lesson I've had from my teacher is 'break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives.'.
>> That's why I think that the best lesson I've had from my teacher is to break down the fixed ideas and look through various perspectives. 

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