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What is the worst news you\'ve ever heard in South Korea?

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I've ever heard the worst news that is a ferry Sewol accident. It's the news that the ferry was flooded, and then I felt sad because younger brother of my friend had there.

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Hi Elic:)

Ohh :( I've heard about this news and it made me heartbroken. It's such a tragic incident. I feel bad for your friends. It must've been really hard on them. Let's home that this won't happen again. 

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I've ever heard the worst news that is a ferry Sewol accident. 
>> The worst news that I've heard is about the Sewol ferry accident. 

It's the news that the ferry was flooded, and then I felt sad because younger brother of my friend had there.
>> It is where the ferry sank down the ocean. I felt sad because the younger brother of my friend was there. 
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