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1. The weather was rainy, so he drove his car carefully.
2. When Peter saw the dog he started running very quickly.
3. Hans has just heard some good news. He is smiling happily.
4. David fell off a tall tree, so he hurt his leg patiently.
5. The thief walked silently in the house, so he wasn¡¯t noticed by anybody.
6. Adam does his homework carefully so he won't make any mistakes.
7. Marcus waited for the flight patiently for about five hours.
8. I understood the subject ¡°Adverbs¡± clearly so I can answer all these questions.
9. Sam behaved silently towards her. She cried all day.
10. Henry plays the piano beautifully indeed.

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1. The weather was rainy, so he drove his car carefully.
>>> Correct.
2. When Peter saw the dog he started running very quickly.
>>> Correct.
3. Hans has just heard some good news. He is smiling happily.
>>> Correct.
4. David fell off a tall tree, so he hurt his leg patiently.
>>> David fell off a tall tree, so he hurt his leg SERIOUSLY.
5. The thief walked silently in the house, so he wasn¡¯t noticed by anybody.
>>> Correct.
6. Adam does his homework carefully so he won't make any mistakes.
>>> Correct.
7. Marcus waited for the flight patiently for about five hours.
>>> Correct.
8. I understood the subject ¡°Adverbs¡± clearly so I can answer all these questions.
>>> Correct.
9. Sam behaved silently towards her. She cried all day.
>>> Sam behaved RUDELY towards her. She cried all day.
10. Henry plays the piano beautifully indeed.
>>> Correct.


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