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Writing Task (Feb 10th, 2022)

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How often do you eat in a restaurant? Which kind of restaurant do you prefer?
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I don¡¯t go to a restaurant these days, not even on weekends, because of the Omicron variant pandemic. But I go out of the office building every Wednesday to have lunch, since Wednesday is the date when we, all of the public servant in the District, are not allowed to use the cafeteria and should have lunch at nearby restaurants to revitalize the local economy.

There are lots of restaurants I like, so it might be better me to say what I don¡¯t like some sorts of sea food ; a raw oyster, a sea squirt and any other sea food like these.

Oh! I love chicken! Very much! I can eat the same brand chicken at least for a week, for every meal.

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Hi, U Seung! 

Oh, that is actually true, it's very dangerous to stay outside nowadays due to the virus. 
The chicken is really indeed a very delicious food and I heard you have delicious chicken in your country. I am actually looking forward to try some when I get there in the future. 

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I don¡¯t go to a restaurant these days, not even on weekends, because of the Omicron variant pandemic. 
>> Correct! 
But I go out of the office building every Wednesday to have lunch, since Wednesday is the date when we, all of the public servant in the District, are not allowed to use the cafeteria and should have lunch at nearby restaurants to revitalize the local economy.
>> But I go out of the office building every Wednesday to have lunch, since Wednesday is the date when we, all of the public servant in the District are not allowed to use the cafeteria and should have lunch at nearby restaurants to revitalize the local economy.
There are lots of restaurants I like, so it might be better me to say what I don¡¯t like some sorts of sea food ; a raw oyster, a sea squirt and any other sea food like these.
>> There are lots of restaurants I like, so it might be better for me to say what I don¡¯t like. Some sorts of seafood; a raw oyster, a sea squirt and any other seafood like these.
Oh! I love chicken! Very much! I can eat the same brand chicken at least for a week, for every meal.
>> Correct! 
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