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What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans?

I hung with my boy friend in last weekend. For my flying to China, I had to keep myself healthy, so we went to Seoul\'s river park which is called Han River. It was so shiny day, so even if it was so cold outside, but sunshine made us warm.
Because I\'m in quarantine in China now, so I cannot go outside to do something in this weekend. I have to live alone in hotel.
First, I need to finish watching Netfliex (Our beloved summer) After that, I will study Chinese for group studying on Sunday evening.
It\'s too boring to be alone, but my friends and family often give some calls, so I think I can stand it which is something boring in quarantine period.

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Hi, Yun Su!
Thank you for sharing with me what you did last weekend. At least they have Netflix in your hotel, in a way, you can still enjoy and relax during weekends. Continue practicing on your written English. Great Job in expressing your ideas.
always
-Caitlyn-
What did you do last weekend?
>>correct
What will you do this weekend? 
>>correct
Do you have any specific plans?
>>correct
I hung with my boy friend in last weekend.
>>I hung out with my boyfriend last weekend.
For my flying to China, I had to keep myself healthy, 
>>Because I will be flying to China, I needed to be healthy.
so we went to Seoul\'s river park which is called Han River.
>>So, we just went to Seoul's river park called Han River.
It was so shiny day, so even if it was so cold outside, but sunshine made us warm.
>>It was a sunny day, so even if it was cold outside, the sunshine made us feel warm.
Because I\'m in quarantine in China now, so I cannot go outside to do something in this weekend.
>>Now, I'm quarantined here in China so I cannot go outside and do something this weekend.
I have to live alone in hotel.
>>I have to stay in the hotel alone.
First, I need to finish watching Netfliex (Our beloved summer) 
>>First, I need to finish watching Our Beloved Summer in Netflix
After that, I will study Chinese for group studying on Sunday evening.
>>After that, I will study Chinese for our group study on Sunday Evening.
It\'s too boring to be alone, but my friends and family often give some calls, 
>>It's too boring being along, but at least my friends and family often calls me.
so I think I can stand it which is something boring in quarantine period.
>>So I think I can stand it and feel less bored during my quarantine period.
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