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What is your favorite sport and why?

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What is your favorite sport and why?

My favorite sport is surfing because it¡¯s exciting also beach sport.
I love beach when I see the sea I feel relaxing and at the same time I can enjoy so much exciting as well.

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Hello, Mun! Happy weekend!

For an active person like you, sports and other activities that demand movements relax you. I think that you are the daughter of the sea because it calls you to have fun and engage to its activites.

Of course, there are also some dangers that these sports bring but they don't matter that much when you calculate your risks. 

I hope that you can go to the beach again soon! I appreciate your effort in doing your homework all the time.

See you in class in a couple of days.

-T. Donna =)

My favorite sport is surfing because it¡¯s exciting also beach sport.
>> Correct!
Or: My favorite sport is surfing because it¡¯s exciting, and also beach sports.

I love beach when I see the sea I feel relaxing and at the same time I can enjoy so much exciting as well.
>> I love the beach when I see the sea. I feel relaxed and at the same time, I can enjoy so much exciting activities as well.
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