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What is that one thing that you will not change about yourself and why?

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Definitely, I will not change about being not late. I've never late for school, work and appointment before. Keeping the time promise is a manner toward the other person. :)

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Hi Elic:)

Wow! I hope everyone is like you! I wish I also have that kind of personality. Hahaha!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Definitely, I will not change about being not late. 
>> I will definitely not change my punctual personality. 

I've never late for school, work and appointment before. 
>> I never go late for school, work or an appointment before. 

Keeping the time promise is a manner toward the other person. :)
>> Keeping the time promised is a good manner towards other people. 

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