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What is your favorite weekend activity?

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My Favorite weekend activity is to play golf with friends.
But it's impossible to go out to play golf as whether.
The lastest play was in last December. It was really too cold to play.

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Hello there, Kevin!

Playing golf needs so much skills, time, and money.^^ Since it's still winter there in your country, there are indoor golf training centers but then playing outdoor is totally so much better as my other students say. When your weather transitions, I am sure you will be out there with your friends enjoying this game.

I appreciate your effort in sending this homework answer on a weekend! I hope you had some good rest. You have made very good sentences with proper word arrangements. Moreover, your words were carefully chosen.

See you in class tomorrow!

-T. Donna =)

My Favorite weekend activity is to play golf with friends.
>> Correct!
Or: My favorite... (Small letter "f" for favorite.)

But it's impossible to go out to play golf as whether.
>> But it's impossible to go out to play golf as of the weather.
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The lastest play was in last December. 
>> The latest (play/game) was last December.

 It was really too cold to play.
>> Correct!
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