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If somebody wrong to me, just check after action and I'll choose forgive or not.
Sometimes, really really mean people they don't know what is wrong.
And I'll never forgive too.
Repay same mean thing, but it's not good way I know.
But it's my personality too.

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Hi Ann:)

Yes, sometimes there are things that are unforgiveable. We have a hard time doing it because we got hurt and those people can do it again. Although, holding grudges towards other people is not okay. Yes, sometimes feeling angry is inevitable but we have to try to to handle our emotions very well. It can benefit us in the long run. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

If somebody wrong to me, just check after action and I'll choose forgive or not.
>> If somebody does something wrong to me, I think about their actions first then I'll choose whether to forgive them or not. 

Sometimes, really really mean people they don't know what is wrong.
>> Sometimes, mean people don't know that they did something wrong. 

And I'll never forgive too.
>> I'll ever forgive them for that. 

Repay same mean thing, but it's not good way I know.
>> Revenge is not a good thing to do but sometime, I do. 

But it's my personality too.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 
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