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Some people say that marriage is outdated (too old-fashioned and not needed). Do you agree or disagr

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I don't agree with that. It's because I think marriage is the result of long-time custums.
So marriage looks like to be outdated, but It's the best way for human-being to survive.
There are many ways to make offsprings, but these ways are similar with marriage as well.

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Hi, Ian! Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. You have answered the question appropriately. Great! However, be careful with spelling and the word "offspring." Its plural form is "offspring" as well.


- Debbie

I don't agree with that.
>> This is a good sentence.

It's because I think marriage is the result of long-time custums.
>> It's because I think marriage is the result of long-established customs.

So marriage looks like to be outdated, but It's the best way for human-being to survive.
>> It looks outdated, but it's the best way for human beings to survive.

There are many ways to make offsprings, but these ways are similar with marriage as well.
>> There are many ways to make offspring, but these ways are similar to marriage.
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