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Who do you usually ask for help? / What kind of help do you need this time?

작성자: 주*빈
2022-02-15 926

회원님의 영작문

I usually ask help from my parents and school, academy, power English teachers. They all give lots of advice and encourage also teaching.
In detail I ask help about how to go to a good high school from my parents and school teachers. For academy and in power English Quenny teachers I keep learning to get higher score in school and speaking English well. This time I need help to saying at right sentences and better stills to communicate with foreigners and enhance my English level.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Risa,
Asking for help builds connections by allowing others to share their information and resources and this, in turn, shows people that you trust their ideas, feel competent in their skills, and appreciate their advice. Asking for help allows for the possibility of fresh ideas and perhaps a new perspective. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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I usually ask help from my parents and school, academy, power English teachers. 
>>I usually ask for help from my parents, school, Academy, and PowerEnglish teachers. 
They all give lots of advice and encourage also teaching.
>> They all gave lots of advice and also encourage me when they are teaching.
In detail I ask help about how to go to a good high school from my parents and school teachers.
>> In detail, I ask help about how to go to a good high school from my parents and school teachers.
 For academy and in power English Quenny teachers I keep learning to get higher score in school and speaking English well.
>> For academy and in PowerEnglish Teacher Quenny and I keep learning together to get higher scores in school and improve my speaking English skills well. 
 This time I need help to saying at right sentences and better stills to communicate with foreigners and enhance my English level.
>> This time I need help to speak and construct complete sentences to communicate better with foreigners and for me to enhance my English level.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I usually ask help from my parents and school, academy, power English teachers. They all give lots of advice and encourage also teaching.
In detail I ask help about how to go to a good high school from my parents and school teachers. For academy and in power English Quenny teachers I keep learning to get higher score in school and speaking English well. This time I need help to saying at right sentences and better stills to communicate with foreigners and enhance my English level.
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