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How to beat Monday Blues?

작성자: 황*하
2022-02-16 561

회원님의 영작문

You might thing I am crazy because I really love Monday because it is quite burden for me to have time with my children during weekends. Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can't play with them without break time. Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing because it is only one chance to spend time with them. Based on my experience, I really hate to have time with my parents since I was in the middle school. I wanted to play with my friends rather than having time with family. Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a days. On weekend, I usually take a good rest that lead me full energy on weekdays. I also like to have a conversation with my colleagues. That's reason why I like Monday. haha

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Hwang!^^ 

Mondays are okay, the only thing that is hard is to wake up early. 
I wake up at around 9 AM or 10 AM for weekends, while 7 AM if it's a weekday. 
My husband always gets mad because I always complain that I don't have enough sleep. 
Well in fact, I actually have 7 hours of sleep. haha
I feel that 7 AM is really early. 

Teacher Andrea

You might thing I am crazy because I really love Monday because it is quite burden for me to have time with my children during weekends.
>> You might thing I am crazy for loving Mondays because it is quite a burden for me to have time with my children during weekends. 

Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can't play with them without break time. 
>> Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can't play with them without having a break. 

Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing because it is only one chance to spend time with them. 
>> Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing up because it is only chance to spend time with them.  

Based on my experience, I really hate to have time with my parents since I was in the middle school. 
>> Based on my experience, I really hate spending time with my parents when I was in the middle school. 

I wanted to play with my friends rather than having time with family. 
>> Correct 

Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a days. 
>> Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a day. 

On weekend, I usually take a good rest that lead me full energy on weekdays. 
>> On weekends. I usually take a good rest leading a full energy on weekdays

I also like to have a conversation with my colleagues. 
>> Correct 

That's reason why I like Monday. haha 
>> That's reason why I like Mondays. haha 
 
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