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Q:Do you think that smart students always sit down in front?
A:I don't know that much, but in elementary school, they don't sit down in front.
We usually change our seat every month.
Also, when we change our seat our teacher decide the seat randomly.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don't know that much, but in elementary school, they don't sit down in front.

>> I don't know much about it, but in elementary school, they don't sit down in front.
We usually change our seat every month.

>> We usually change where we seat every month.
Also, when we change our seat our teacher decide the seat randomly.

>> Also, when we change where we seat, our teacher decides the seating positions randomly.

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