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Writing Exercise: Can you tell me how often you go to a beauty salon or barber shop? Where is it located and what does it look like? How are the people who work there? Is it expensive to get your hair done there?

I don't go to the beauty salon or the barber shop

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Hi Rosie!
Thank you for your composition today.
Keep studying hard!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don't go to the beauty salon or the barber shop.
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