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Q : What food do you not like that much? Answer in a few sentences.

I don't eat cucumbers very well excluding some cases. Because I hate the unique fragrance of cucumbers. I don't get used to it at all.

Donna! There seems to be a slight error in my feedback.
5. It's so horrible!
>> Correct!
Or: He's gorgeous.

and I don't think I can do my homework next Monday. Because the monday feedback is already checked.
What should I do next week's homework? Help me!

I always thank you so much. I hope you peaceful weekend.

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Hi, Hae Ju!

I am glad to see you here on the homework page again. Do not worry about your Monday homework. Just send your answer on the Wednesday homework together with the Monday homework.

As for the food you do not like much, cucumbers taste well when they are mixed in a drink. But you are right, cucumber has a strong taste and smell. I am sure you do not eat cucumber kimchi.

Lastly, I apologize for the mistake I made on the #5 entry on your sentences. I have already placed the correct sentence alternative on your page as well as here below. 

Thank you so much for all of these concerns. It's always wonderful to read from you, Hae Ju! Stay safe and sound.

-T. Donna =)

I don't eat cucumbers very well excluding some cases.
>> Correct! 

Because I hate the unique fragrance of cucumbers. I don't get used to it at all.
>> Correct!
Or: Because I hate the unique fragrance of cucumbers, I don't get used to it at all.

Donna! There seems to be a slight error in my feedback.
>> Correct!

5. It's so horrible!
>> Correct!
Or: He's gorgeous.
>> It's so terrible!

and I don't think I can do my homework next Monday. Because the monday feedback is already checked.
>> And, I don't think I can do my homework next Monday because the Monday feedback is already checked.

What should I do next week's homework? Help me!
>> What should I do during next week's homework? Help me.

I always thank you so much. I hope you peaceful weekend.
>> I always thank you so much. I hope you have a peaceful weekend.
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