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I think it is dynamite because the inventor of it has regretted the invention, and he said, "I didn't make dynamite to kill people but dig grounds." Contrary to his words, however, many people died because of it.

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Wow! I didn't know that! Thanks for sharing that knowledge. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think it is dynamite because the inventor of it has regretted the invention, and he said, "I didn't make dynamite to kill people but dig grounds." 
>> I think the greatest invention is dynamite because the inventor regretted making it and he said, "I didn't make dynamite to kill people but to dig grounds." 

Contrary to his words, however, many people died because of it.
>>Contrary to his words, many people died because of it.

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