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32.33.34

작성자: 김*현
2022-02-18 934

회원님의 영작문

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Thank you for sending me the message! I am so happy to invite you for the party tonight. After getting off the bus which arrived at the Seoul express bus terminal, you can take yellow patterned subway line named 'Suinbundangsun.' After riding a subway, you must get off when it arrives 'Seoul forest' station. I will be there on time to pick you up. It is so easy so you won't make any mistakes!
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Hello I am Mr.Kim. I am calling to ask about some apartments near the Gangnam station. I am looking for the apartment which has three bedrooms, and two bathrooms, I can offer you as much money as I can, so please call me back if you have some estimates suitable for my requirements.
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I was so surprised to know that you saw me and my companion in the cafeteria. It was Yedam, and I met her when I was 18. She is so friendly and considerate, so I like to be with her. When we were in cafeteria, We was about to talk about our futures and lives. I hope it can be an answer of your question.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Harry,
 I am confident that you'll improve more with your communication skill with thorough practice. Always do your best and the best things will also happen when you study English continuously. Good job so far! I would just like to highlight some important aspects we could improve on so we could sustain your progress.  Keep improving your English skills. Good luck with your exams..:) Have a great weekend..~ Teacher QUENNY..

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Thank you for sending me the message! I am so happy to invite you for the party tonight. 
>> Thank you for sending me the message! I am so happy to invite you to the party tonight.
After getting off the bus which arrived at the Seoul express bus terminal, you can take yellow patterned subway line named 'Suinbundangsun.' 
>> After getting off the bus that arrived at the Seoul express bus terminal, you can take a yellow patterned subway line named 'Suinbundangsun.'
After riding a subway, you must get off when it arrives 'Seoul forest' station.
>>  After riding a subway, you must get off when it arrives 'Seoul forest' station.
 I will be there on time to pick you up. It is so easy so you won't make any mistakes!
>>  I will be there on time to pick you up. It is so easy so you won't make any mistakes!
33
Hello I am Mr.Kim. I am calling to ask about some apartments near the Gangnam station. 
>> Hello, I am Mr.Kim. I am calling to ask about some apartments near the Gangnam station.
I am looking for the apartment which has three bedrooms, and two bathrooms, I can offer you as much money as I can, so please call me back if you have some estimates suitable for my requirements.
>> I am looking for an apartment that has three bedrooms, and two bathrooms, I can offer you as much money as I can, so please call me back if you have some estimations suitable for my requirements.

34
I was so surprised to know that you saw me and my companion in the cafeteria. 
>> I was so surprised to know that you saw me and my companion in the cafeteria.
It was Yedam, and I met her when I was 18. 
>>  It was Yedam, and I met her when I was 18 years old.
She is so friendly and considerate, so I like to be with her. 
>> She is so friendly and considerate, so I like to be with her most of the time.
When we were in cafeteria, We was about to talk about our futures and lives. 
>> When we were in the cafeteria, We were talking about our futures and lives. 
I hope it can be an answer of your question.
>>  I hope it can be an answer to your question.

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32
Thank you for sending me the message! I am so happy to invite you for the party tonight. After getting off the bus which arrived at the Seoul express bus terminal, you can take yellow patterned subway line named 'Suinbundangsun.' After riding a subway, you must get off when it arrives 'Seoul forest' station. I will be there on time to pick you up. It is so easy so you won't make any mistakes!
33
Hello I am Mr.Kim. I am calling to ask about some apartments near the Gangnam station. I am looking for the apartment which has three bedrooms, and two bathrooms, I can offer you as much money as I can, so please call me back if you have some estimates suitable for my requirements.
34
I was so surprised to know that you saw me and my companion in the cafeteria. It was Yedam, and I met her when I was 18. She is so friendly and considerate, so I like to be with her. When we were in cafeteria, We was about to talk about our futures and lives. I hope it can be an answer of your question.
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