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I heard that there are increasing plant-based meats including soybean ham and meat.

If we reduce the amount of meat to eating, it will be positive effect on protecting the environment eventually.

But to choosing plant-based meat is only our one option, it is not the best way for our health and environment.

It is time for us to consider seriously the environment that our descendants will live.

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I heard that there are increasing plant-based meats including soybean ham and meat.
>>> I heard that  plant- base meat that are increasing including soybean ham and meat.
If we reduce the amount of meat to eating, it will be positive effect on protecting the environment eventually.
>>> If we reduce the amount of meat that we are eating. eventually, it will have a positive effect  in protecting the environment.
But to choosing plant-based meat is only our one option, it is not the best way for our health and environment.
>>> But choosing plant-based meat is one of our options, it is not the best way for or health and the environment.
It is time for us to consider seriously the environment that our descendants will live.
>>> It is time for us to consider seriously the environment that our descendants will live in.
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