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One day a person visited the zoo.
then she saw the very thin lions.
so she reported to police.
but zoo official said "we are giving food everyday but lions did not eat."
police thinks zoo official's answer is right.
so police wants to give benefit of doubt.

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Good evening Vicky! Thank you for doing your homework today. I really appreciate it. ^_^
T. Irene
One day a person visited the zoo.
>>> Correct. 
then she saw the very thin lions.
>>> Correct. 
so she reported to police.
>>> So she reported it to the police. 
but zoo official said "we are giving food everyday but lions did not eat."
>>> But the zoo official said, "We are giving them food every day but the lions did not eat it."
police thinks zoo official's answer is right.
>>> The police believed in the zoo official's answer. 
so police wants to give benefit of doubt.
>>> He wants to give the benefit of a doubt. 




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