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What do you think is the best company to work at in your country and why?

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I think the best company communicates well. It's because South Korea is a Confucian culture, so it's hard to give opinions to older people. :(

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Hi Elic :)

Oh, I was not aware of this. It is important to work in a place where different ideas are catered. This kind of culture should be changed. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think the best company communicates well. 
>> I think the best company to work for is the one that has an environment that communicates well. 

It's because South Korea is a Confucian culture, so it's hard to give opinions to older people. :(
It's because South Korea has the Confucian culture, so it's hard to give opinions to older people. :(

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