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41 Hello! Good afternoon, professor Mike. I am Harry, and I am one of your students in Economics class. I just received my exam score. To be honest, I was quite disappointed in my score. Since I felt confident in my essay which I sent you previously, I can't understand why I needed to get this score. I hope you can answer my couple of questions. It would be great honer to listen to your answer. First of all, in my article, can you tell me what part has deficits in your checking factor? Secondly, Do you have some points you always need to checkout? Lastly, can you show me head student's essay? I would appreciate your help.
42 Hi, processor Kim! Good evening. This is Harry from Geography class. I would like to say that, well, I am not feeling good right now, because of covid19. I was infected by this disgusting disease, and I am afraid I can't be on final exam for your class. And I have a question that, Can't I take a test on another day? I ardently want your help. Thanks.

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Hi Harry, 
 It's good that you were open to reason out and give more examples to support your ideas. However, you need to be clearer and more specific with your answers, It was apparent that you were interested In making sentences and talking about different topics. You tried to defend your choices well. In terms of grammar, being familiar with the correct usage of prepositions and articles will help you construct your sentences better. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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41 Hello! Good afternoon, professor Mike.
>> Hello! Good afternoon, professor Mike. 
 I am Harry, and I am one of your students in Economics class.
>> I am Harry, and I am one of your students in the Economics class.
 I just received my exam score. To be honest, I was quite disappointed in my score. 
>> I just received my exam score. To be honest, I was quite disappointed in my score. 
Since I felt confident in my essay which I sent you previously, I can't understand why I needed to get this score. 
>> Since I felt confident in my essay which I sent to you previously, I can't understand why I needed to get this low score. 
I hope you can answer my couple of questions. It would be great honer to listen to your answer. 
>> I hope you can answer a couple of questions I want to ask. It would be a great honor to listen to your answer. 
First of all, in my article, can you tell me what part has deficits in your checking factor?
>>First of all, in the essay I wrote, can you tell me what part has deficits in your checking factor? 
 Secondly, Do you have some points you always need to checkout? 
>> Secondly, Do you have some points you always need to checkout? 
Lastly, can you show me head student's essay? I would appreciate your help.
>> Lastly, can you show me the head student's essay? I would appreciate your help.
42 Hi, processor Kim! Good evening. This is Harry from Geography class. 
>> Hi, processor Kim! Good evening. This is Harry from the Geography class. 
I would like to say that, well, I am not feeling good right now, because of covid19. 
>> I would like to say that, well, I am not feeling good right now, because of covid19. 
I was infected by this disgusting disease, and I am afraid I can't be on final exam for your class. 
>>I was infected by this disgusting disease, and I am afraid I can't be on the final exam for your class. 
And I have a question that, Can't I take a test on another day? I ardently want your help. Thanks.
>> And I have a question for you, Can't I take a test on another day? I ardently want your help and immediate response to this problem. Thank you for you kind consideration. 
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41 Hello! Good afternoon, professor Mike. I am Harry, and I am one of your students in Economics class. I just received my exam score. To be honest, I was quite disappointed in my score. Since I felt confident in my essay which I sent you previously, I can't understand why I needed to get this score. I hope you can answer my couple of questions. It would be great honer to listen to your answer. First of all, in my article, can you tell me what part has deficits in your checking factor? Secondly, Do you have some points you always need to checkout? Lastly, can you show me head student's essay? I would appreciate your help.
42 Hi, processor Kim! Good evening. This is Harry from Geography class. I would like to say that, well, I am not feeling good right now, because of covid19. I was infected by this disgusting disease, and I am afraid I can't be on final exam for your class. And I have a question that, Can't I take a test on another day? I ardently want your help. Thanks.
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