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If I can pick a superpower I'll choice the teleporting.
I'm very lazy person. And most lazy moment is morning.
In the moring, when I should be going some where I really really wants to teleporting.
But it's only wish.
In reality, I have to take a bus and transfer to subway and walk a lot....

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Hi Ann:)

Yes, that's very convenient. Imagine being in a specific place in just a couple of seconds, right? 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

If I can pick a superpower I'll choice the teleporting.
>> If I can pick a superpower, I'll choose the ability to teleport. 

I'm very lazy person. 
>> I'm a very lazy person. 

And most lazy moment is morning.
>> I am the most lazy in the morning. 

In the moring, when I should be going some where I really really wants to teleporting.
>> In the morning, when I have to go somewhere, I really want to teleport instead. 

But it's only wish.'
>> But it's only my dream. 

In reality, I have to take a bus and transfer to subway and walk a lot..
>> In reality, I have to take a bus, subway and walk a lot. 
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