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1. Father and daughter went back home after they had a nice time ice-skating outing.
2. Mr.Tower is going over the new school project. He doesn't want any mistakes.
3. We went to Jack's house to say "get well soon".
4. Did you hear that Lucy is dating with William and they really love each other?
5. Look! That brown dog is chewing at a bone because he is very hungry.
6. Christopher got out of the bus when they reached the school.
7. Mr.Tumbler took off his jumper when he got inside his house.
8. The runner should run faster or he will lose the race.

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Good evening Vicky. Thank you for sending back your homework. ^_^
T. Irene
1. Father and daughter went back home after they had a nice time ice-skating outing.
>>> Correct.
2. Mr.Tower is going over the new school project. He doesn't want any mistakes.
>>> Correct.
3. We went to Jack's house to say "get well soon".
>>> Correct.
4. Did you hear that Lucy is dating with William and they really love each other?
>>> Correct.
5. Look! That brown dog is chewing at a bone because he is very hungry.
>>> Correct.
6. Christopher got out of the bus when they reached the school.
>>> Correct.
7. Mr.Tumbler took off his jumper when he got inside his house.
>>> Correct.
8. The runner should run faster or he will lose the race.
>>> Correct.



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