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What are extreme sports?
The extreme sports is little dangeres sports.
What extreme sports are you most scared of?
I don't know. Because I don't know many kinds of extreme sports.

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Hi Seung Ju,
Extreme sports are action sports or alternative sports, sporting events, or pursuits characterized by high speeds and high risk. And Base or Bungee jumping is undoubtedly the world's most dangerous sport. It shows that there is a far bigger chance of dying base jumping than doing any other activity. ~ Teacher QUENNY.
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What are extreme sports?
>>  What are extreme sports?(Correct)
The extreme sports is little dangeres sports.
>> Extreme sports are a kind of dangerous sport.
What extreme sports are you most scared of?
>>What extreme sports are you most scared of?(Correct)
I don't know. Because I don't know many kinds of extreme sports.
>> I don't know because I haven't tried any extreme sports and I also don't know the different types of extreme sports. 

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What are extreme sports?
The extreme sports is little dangeres sports.
What extreme sports are you most scared of?
I don't know. Because I don't know many kinds of extreme sports.
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